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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-07 10:14 PM



Then Upon This Morning Bed
~*Marge Tindal*~

Awaken me from slumber deep
lash of eye - no longer sleep
fragranced in forever keep
breathless want of you

Then upon this morning bed
tousled curl upon this head
take your need of me instead
as I breathe you slowly in

In gentle whispers of my name
I am lulled to sleep again
Hold that smile - for in a while
I will awaken ~ full beguile


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-07 10:15 PM


BeeYOOTeeFULL
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2 posted 2001-05-07 10:17 PM


Wonderful Marge, very nice  

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3 posted 2001-05-07 10:19 PM


Marge, I think I am ready for bed!!  I want to wake up to ALL that you have discribed.  How beautiful.  ME
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4 posted 2001-05-07 10:38 PM


Beautiful and soft, lovely!
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5 posted 2001-05-07 10:42 PM


Imagining you in full beguile..and little ele..boggles the mind, Marge  
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6 posted 2001-05-07 10:43 PM


~Marge,...this is warming, peaceful and truly a pleasure to read. On my third. Lovely Lady. *Peace.
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7 posted 2001-05-07 11:12 PM


Walt~
Why thank you, friend !

Whiskey~
Glad you liked.  Thank you.

MotherEarth~
Thank you.
Night-Night !

Walker~
Pleased to know you enjoyed it.

Balladeer~
Beats a bowl of Cornflakes ?  

SpitFire~
Awwww !  Thank you for letting me know.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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8 posted 2001-05-07 11:21 PM


Marge--This is so softly sensual and lovely...wonderful...you are.
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9 posted 2001-05-08 01:22 AM


Oh my but this was so delicate (not really a poetic adjective) but that is how I felt it to be.  I loved it, and put it into the delicate section of my library!  You be writing sweet nothings well Lady Marge.

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10 posted 2001-05-08 06:54 PM


Martie~
Thank you, hon.
I really enjoyed this one myself ~

Mysteria~
Delicate will do quite nicely, dearie.
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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