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Ended Friendship
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Ended Friendship |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Ended Friendship *~I really hate to say this, Our friendship wasn't meant to last. The times we shared together, Have now faded to the past. I told you it would happen, Our friendship was bound to end. Although I know you care for me, I cannot consider you my friend. Please don't try to argue, Just try to understand. Time can change some people, As the tide can change the sand. Our friendship has been lovely, But you see it has an end. For now I feel a different way, I’m in love with you, my friend. * * art: www.all.com - Beach Love - Nadja Bernhardt ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow, what wonderful write!!!!!!!! Enjoyed this very much. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh you had me. I couldn't conceive of your being so cruel. This is wonderful. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! You had me going there. 1derful finish! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Awwwwwww ! Now that 'delightful' photo ... gave it away for me ... I LOVED IT ! You softie, you !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
hope the relationship goes on; be a shame to lose a friend because you fell in love with him.... Dennis |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Loved the ending of this, Sharon. Great write! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I first thought, oh one of those sad stories again, till you surprized me completely in the end. Super! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Superior writing. May love bloom and continue until it is much deeper. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thank you for the happy ending, I needed it...even if it wasn't mine. Great poem! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I want to thank you all for reading this one, as it is for two very special close friends of mine who are madly in love, who met each other on a poetry board much like this one, as friends commenting on each others poems. They did beat the odds as yes, they did meet on the internet, and it worked! Thank you for enjoying it, and this is to salute a new dawn. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673 [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
~*~sighs~*~...do I ever know how this feels....absolutely beautiful, Sharon... thank you for touching my heart with a breeze of serenity in the midst of the turbulence of my storms. I know when they subside...the love I have followed will be waiting, and all of the pain will be forgotten.. ((((((((((((HUGS TO YOU)))))))))))))))))) and much love, dawn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martha: It will! Hugs back, and remember here I am in cyberspace just as "real as they get"! Glad you liked it. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause!!! What a wonderfully delightful twist you've placed on the end of this Mysteria! Clapping here! Excellent flow and rhyme scheme, and such a lovely surprise at the end, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you Kit, I am practicing that darn rhyme thingee! |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon...I just HAD to come back and read this again today...and send it to a friend. I love it! ((((Hugs))))), dawn |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Not ended... ENHANCED! *S* This is great, Mysteria... and good luck to your friends! *S* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a "play" on words, just love that....you pulled the reader right in and finished with beauty... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martha: print it out honey! Suthern: I shall send them that luck and thank you for reading. Green eyes: This sometimes happens and this was one of those times! Isn't love grand? ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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