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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-05-07 05:30 PM


If I ever need an answer
I look into your eyes
To see into forever
Like looking at the sky

Bow my head in humble praise
And kneel before you
Offer up anything I have
And give my love to you

Time seems to magnify
As we go through so much
Only deepens the bond
Of hearts when we touch

They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light

No tricks that time can employ
Will ever our love destroy


© Copyright 2001 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-07 05:37 PM


lucky, lucky lady you have there....this is so beautiful  
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2 posted 2001-05-07 06:33 PM


beyond time. . .

excellent PK. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mother_Earth
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3 posted 2001-05-07 07:51 PM


PoeticKnight, this is so very beautiful and I'll bet a lot of lovers wish it was written for them.  ME
walker
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4 posted 2001-05-07 10:40 PM


Romantic, just the way I like it!
WhiteOnyx
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5 posted 2001-05-08 12:48 PM


Great poem! Hits the 'nail-on-the-head' with a great definition of the word 'Love'.  

"The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears."

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6 posted 2001-05-09 10:33 AM


A most lovely poem indeed!
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