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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-07 05:08 PM



You caress, my leg under the table,
as everyone dine and the music played.
Your hand found its way,
igniting my skin on fire.
Each touch provokes desire.
Abusing my self control,
pushing me to the limits.
Wanting your hands to do,
what you very well want.
You continue tempting me,
while I smile and nod at things.
My mind is not here,
it's far away.
Picturing us,
alone in a world where you and I,
can fulfill this passion stirred.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-05-07 05:13 PM


good grief.....whew....did somebody just turn on the heat?! very sensual.....I like...   SEA
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2 posted 2001-05-07 05:15 PM


Love playing that game when I know he has to stay composed. This is sensuous!!!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-05-07 05:17 PM


This is interesting to read...and very sensual...brought similar experiences to my thoughts...excellent writing...James
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-05-07 05:19 PM


Well done.  Sensual.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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5 posted 2001-05-07 06:39 PM


wow walker. . . you know. . . well. . . of course you know. . .  

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6 posted 2001-05-08 12:41 PM


You're bad...and I mean that as the ultimate compliment.  Great!
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7 posted 2001-05-08 04:55 PM


Walker,

Goodness!  Yes, very sensual and such good writing.  Whew!  Hey, somebody turn the air on.     Thanks.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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