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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-07 04:55 PM



In a web I'm trap,
but give me the bottle I'll drink to that.
I just want to forget with its sweet taste.
Sipping it slowly,
or gulping it down.
Same effect, I'll still keep my broken heart.
As I  drink, I'll agonize.
But by the third drink, I'll fantasize.
During the fifth drink, I'll be laughing.
On the eighth, I'll be crying.
By the tenth, if I'm still alive,
I'll be wishing to have drank only one glass.
Cheers to that!


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1 posted 2001-05-07 05:17 PM


I can make it 4 when I'm playing horse shoes!   Ususally, my limit is 2. This is great....   SEA
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-05-07 05:20 PM


Cheers, indeed!
JLR
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3 posted 2001-05-08 12:36 PM


Wishing I didn't relate to this so well!  
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2001-05-09 01:43 PM


Love this one!!!  so back to the front it goes to be embibed and enjoyed by our other thirsty brothers and sisters!!  Nice job, Walker!!!!!  

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-05-09 01:53 PM


Love this poem, as it is so painfully true, I must admit.

Titia


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