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Spring Haiku
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Spring Haiku |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
 Cherry Blossoms cherry blossoms lost laughter in a wind storm old rose nods asleep Spring Jewel Spring jewel flung far many nations hear your call blossoms swell from soul "I am not now that which I have been." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautifully done!  SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Spring has definitely sprung Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed both poems, lovely! thanks! ~Tier |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
SEA and Interloper: indeed spring has finally arrived in the Pacific NW. The sun most welcome. Thank you. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Tiersdin: Thank you. I hope spring is going well for you. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That is a familiar scene where I live as you know, and you did it to perfection! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done. I hate to see them fall. Joyce |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful.... I am a recovering Haikuholic.....lol There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Mysteria: the trees are always my first indication of spring's arrival; I never tire of their beauty. Joyce: Just after the two outside my window bloomed, we experienced a stiff wind storm; the petals snowed down from the branches and the wind carried their faint scent. Jamie: never recover from short form. It is so wonderful to the eye and ear. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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