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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-05-07 09:11 AM


A new beginning

Close your eyes, and travel with me
Discover trails of hope and life
Even if there’s no tomorrow
Even if there’s no way back


Close your eyes and watch the rainbow
How colorful ribbons represents love
Through darkness and wet falling rain
A touch of sunbeam’s warm embrace

Close your eyes and open your senses
Experient first the world inside
Inhale the air of loving peace
Open your mind by spirits touch

She shows the beauty of Mother Earth
Captured in wild waterfalls
In mountains altitude and proudly
Inside the wave of nature’s strife

Enchanting spring full of birth and new life
Golden sun spreads her summer warmth
Fiery leaves inside autumn’s storm
Winter cold within the dead
Yes within the dead
But not the end
Cause
A new beginning
Yes, a new beginning
Within promises of new life
Reaching out, knowing how to survive
While we practice what elders have taught us
Haven’t we all taken our own place in this circle of life?

And that’s why we have to respect
The reason to protect
Because our path is woven
With so much preciouses lives
‘Cause we have taken part
In the wave of Nature’s heart
Most precious gift of love
From our Creator above.

Charisma

~*TMP*~
27 april 2001



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-07-2001).]

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-05-07 09:18 AM


Lovely, Charisma, in form and message.  Yes, a new beginning every year when spring is new and winter's gone while land's replenished.
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2 posted 2001-05-07 10:52 AM


My eyes are closed...
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3 posted 2001-05-07 12:02 PM


I loved your message, Charisma....a superb write!!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-05-07 03:20 PM


Charisma~ this is so pretty....I like this VERY much!!    SEA
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5 posted 2001-05-07 03:46 PM


very nice, Charisma!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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6 posted 2001-05-07 06:48 PM


superb Charisma. . .

I love new beginnings. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-05-08 10:35 AM


enjoy
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8 posted 2001-05-09 03:31 AM


Charisma~
Just look at you ... this is BEAUTIFUL !

'Enchanting spring full of birth and new life
Golden sun spreads her summer warmth
Fiery leaves inside autumn’s storm
Winter cold within the dead
Yes within the dead
But not the end
Cause
A new beginning
Yes, a new beginning
Within promises of new life
Reaching out, knowing how to survive
While we practice what elders have taught us
Haven’t we all taken our own place in this circle of life?'


Your thoughts are exquisite !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Charisma
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9 posted 2001-05-09 02:05 PM


VAS: thank you for your nice reply, I'm so glad that you liked it.

Interloper: And do you see the beautyful world inside you, cause it isn't nature only, that have new beginnings.....

Nate: thank you for the superb my friend.

Sea: thank you, I am really happy that you liked it.

Irish Rose: thank you my friend.

Sven: thank you so much for the superb my friend.

Vandana: glad you enjoyed it.

Marge:Thank you my friend, I always appreciate your replies very much....

Thank you all for your time to read and reply

((hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2001-05-09 04:11 PM


Thank you for the mini vacation. It was very refreshing.

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