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Do I Love Thee?
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Do I Love Thee? |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Do I love thee? Are there countless stars, Like ways in which I love? Are there countless dreams, In which to dream of? The question asked One too many times For an answer Found within our minds Given the choice between Thee, and the ever changing sky How could I choose thus, Where thoughts of you reside? How can you quantify love? And how can you compare? Love seems different from points of view Between those that love is shared Do I love thee? Not as pure as a woman loves a man; Yet, with all that I am |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Personally speaking...quite timely. Understood, appreciated every word. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well said. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you JLR, its good to be timely. Thanks Interloper. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
making me sigh......  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
love the last two lines PK. . . as I've said before. . . we're living those parallel lives. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Davey Hays New Member
since 2001-05-10
Posts 4California, United States |
Nice, nice. You should check out my poem, same topic and theory. Well stated, good content. Intriguing, enigmatic theory. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
quote: All of it is beautiful, but this stanza spoke loudest. Thank you for this. |
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