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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-05-07 03:08 AM


I
do not
weep
for words
my
friend I
cry
I sigh
I
pretend
my
surprise
you
my friend
mine--
I lick
my
finger's
edge...
Tides
in roar
sea
in beg
cling
my toes
upon
the ledge
and below
my everything
the twinkling
possibilities...

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 05-07-2001).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2001-05-07 03:14 AM


I
pretend
my
surprise
...
...
Tides
in roar
sea
in beg
cling
my toes
...

Wonderful... nailed the feelings exquisitely ...

Regards O Serene One,
Sudhir

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2001-05-07 07:08 AM


Serenity~
I enjoy it when your feelings pour ~

'cling
my toes
upon
the ledge
and below
my everything
the twinkling
possibilities...'

Ah ... 'the twinkling possibilities...'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-05-08 06:40 PM


really enjoyed this    written well..i like  

hugs, g

"...if i ran away,
i'd never have the strength
to go very far..."  

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-05-08 08:52 PM


I look over the edge. . .
and see you next to me. . .
because we both know
that life is best seen
from the ledge. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2001-05-08 09:12 PM


~Hey K,...can I tell you something extremely strange that I do with these little writes of yours? heh. In e. In e I will. - They dance themselves inside my head and repeat, repeat, repeat. Always enjoying. Take care you. *Peace.
redheart angrybraids
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
6 posted 2001-05-08 11:39 PM


magnificent,
i totally was brought to a silver blue feeling on the ledge

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 2001-05-09 05:56 PM


cling
my toes
upon
the ledge
and below
my everything
the twinkling
possibilities...

ahh yes the twinkling possibilities!  
It'a always a pleasure to read you hon  

Maree

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