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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-05-07 02:25 AM


Time spent wondering
Gazing up to the clouds
Eyes fixed on nothing
Staring into space
Mind not really thinking
Dreaming of other times
snap into reality
How long has it been ?
What felt like five minutes
Was more like an hour
Where did everyone go ?
Disapeared like the sun into the sea
The sky has turned from blue to black
Eyes not even noticing the transformation
The air has grown colder
Not holding warmth as before
My eyes feel heavy
They begin to close
My mind drifts
Yet more dreams of a different kind
Creep into my mind
As my body sleeps

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 05-07-2001).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-05-07 03:23 AM


Nicely penned...

Regards,
Sudhir

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-05-07 07:14 AM


WhiskeyGal~
Been in one of those 'time passes' zones
from time to time ~

I visited your poetry web pages ... NICE !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-05-07 12:12 PM


"Dissapeared like the sun in the sea"

What a powerful thought......I liked this Whiskey....brilliant writing!!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-05-07 01:12 PM


hopefully, they are dreams softly spoken. . .

great poem. . . well done. . .  

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5 posted 2001-05-07 02:54 PM


Write on.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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