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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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0 posted 2001-05-07 12:23 PM


Yesterday…Today

Am I so easily misunderstood
why shouldn’t I be
I’ve made love to some
who understood less.

Are my intentions so vague
as to call to question
innocent correspondence
or is it?

Don’t take the time, the bother
to ask me now
yesterday I may have answered honestly
today I don’t know how.


© Copyright 2001 JLR - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-07 12:46 PM


wow!  That's confusion over life, me thinks.  Is that what you want me to get from this one?  It caused my thoughts to spin some.  Thinking how one forgets how to be honest, wow.
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-05-07 11:50 AM


Whoa.  Thought provoking ...
Joe Houck
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3 posted 2001-05-07 04:16 PM


how the mind changes from day to day.
cool poem.

*JOE*

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-05-07 05:27 PM


Nicely written...

~Tier

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5 posted 2001-05-07 06:37 PM


and people wonder why they don't know. . .

well written RJ. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
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6 posted 2001-05-07 10:29 PM


JLR- I think this one is the one that I identify myself with most(sad but true).Thanks for this one.
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