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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-06 08:13 PM

Welcome to the year,
that invisible I became.
An ordinary life,
made complicated by simplicity itself.
In all honesty my disappearance began,
when decisions didn't matter.
My thoughts were transparent.
My love was like contact paper on a book.
I struggle to appear,
but the more I struggle the more I disappeared.
Even my tears didn't show.
Or at least no one saw them.
My sadness,
had a hard time letting go,
it fought until the end to no avail.
My hands were the first to go,
they stopped doing what they loved the best.
In time everything was gone.
Now I hold nothing,
endlessly I stand.
People walk right pass me,
specially the ones that I love.
I talk no one listens.
And in my misery,
misery holds me.
Welcome to the year,
that invisible I became.
The year I lost it all,
my life, my love, my all.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-06 08:24 PM

walker ~~ you write beautifully, and they do not go unnoticed. LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-07 05:10 PM

The sadness your words portray. Oh how I hope you become visible again, to someone
who will appreciate your love.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-07 05:32 PM

I don't believe you are invisible at all. This is coincidental. I attended the musical Chicago last night and this poor fellow had such a poor opinion of himself that he thought he was invisible. Joyce

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-07 06:34 PM

we are never so invisible that the heart cannot see. . .

sad write walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-05-08 12:45 PM

Seems we're having a very similar year...sorry about that, for both of us.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2001-05-08 07:05 AM

"An ordinary life,
made complicated by simplicity itself."

I think this line is superb, walker - You've got a wonderful knack for expressing yourself... Nicely done...

Let us know when you register your son - We'll rally round and give him the grand Passionate welcome...

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-05-08 07:13 AM

This is beautiful Walker. You've captured such sorrow within these lines, one that can be felt deeply. Wonderful expression and phrasing, very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2001-05-12 07:04 PM

Never feel you are invisible, My Friend, because someone ALWAYS see's! Just we don't always know it.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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