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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-06 07:54 PM



Gazing through the shadows in my life,
I found your seductive eyes.
Your open arms offered the only way out.
An escape, in a split second of the torment in my life.
No time to waste.
No time to think.
No memories of you and me.
Just lying here,
loving like this.
Forgetting the risks.
Pretending that this is fine with me.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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1 posted 2001-05-06 11:42 PM


Past or present, real or fantasy...I, once again, understand what you write.
wandering glider
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aloft
2 posted 2001-05-07 12:41 PM


but pretending can be sooooooo risky...
nice poem anyway.

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2001-05-07 10:00 AM


sometimes you have to forget the risk and just enjoy  

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Brad Majors
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Georgia
4 posted 2001-05-07 02:51 PM


So wonderful! Sometimes we must close our eyes and just go for it!!  
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-05-07 02:53 PM


Ain't pretend wonderful?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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