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Cosmic Fears |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
ever remember the past as though some small memory would drift by watching you kneel in the dust. ever remember it being more then it was hoping for the best and finding it lost. did you think beyond your ideals that fell that night upon the shore your rememberance is pure. to find the thought is gone away you stand alone this very day. so sing the angels that fall on your tears and gather them quick to fill those years. the ones you failed to live your life to live for others that took your rights. then drift to heaven this day is done kiss the stars softly they welcome you home. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ever remember the past as though some small memory would drift by watching you kneel in the dust. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Excellent beginning. Excellent imagery. write on! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This has a great deal of depth from someone who is a (snicker..snicker  ) Kings fan!!The baby, on the other hand...is a LEAF Fan.  Just hadda!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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