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Open Poetry #13

Relationship

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2001-05-06 05:03 PM

Relationship

A relationship of
time and eras.

Depending, Relying, Grant’d
Talking
Loss, Communication, Closeness,
Talking
Time, Arguments, Mending,
Talking
Sharing, Working, Loving
Talking
Caressing, Touching, Hug’s
Talking

All this, Still trying
To make
The rocking chairs
Rock together,
After all the Years.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-05-06 05:36 PM

Glad to see ya posting again, Bern. Loved this, especially the ending. You write and grow my friend!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-06 06:36 PM

aw, come on you aren't in a rocking chair yet are you

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-05-06 11:20 PM

would be great if things worked like this...nice sentiments you have written here Bernie

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-05-06 11:23 PM

Many adverbs here, really good, appropriate ones...love though, is a verb. Action not a description. Wish someone had thought to remind me of that. Hope your effort is sincere and fruitful...we all deserve love.

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

5 posted 2001-05-07 01:30 AM

there was another choice?

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