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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-05-06 08:49 AM


He lays down care to eider dreams ,
she stirs in moon-lit afterglow .
To blend once more in billowed streams
sweet frosting on the cake , below ...

The world of daily cares , forgot ,
may simmer for a thousand years .
Adrift above , they mind it not ,
as lovers cast aside those fears .

To rise up through the feathered mist
of touch , on wings , they now explore
familiar places , practiced moves .
Impassioned to resume once more ...

The act of simply letting go .
Now that's my fav'rite cooking show

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 05-06-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-05-06 09:53 AM


DrMoose~
This piece is just lovely.
I thank you for the enjoyment !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2001-05-06 06:10 PM


Dear Marge ,
So glad you enjoyed . Still learning my way around the kitchen ( so many utensils , yanno !)Still have no idea why anyone would want an egg timer ( unless it was to cook eggs , do ya think ? )
Doc

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3 posted 2001-05-07 01:13 PM


Almost a sonnet.  Nice thoughts.
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 2001-05-08 04:05 AM


Ahhh... I see you've been in the kitchen again Doc... and an excellent bit of cuisine you have placed upon the table.  Your words are a fine wine and I raise a glass to you and yours.  Cheers!  

Now give me back my spoons and get out of my kitchen!  

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