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Amature2
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0 posted 2001-05-06 12:55 PM



A Little Bird died today
The Little Bird got in my way
I hit it with my car
I was enjoying a nice cigar

At first I thought it's not my fault
But later thought,
I'm the one racing down the asphalt

Always rushing at a fast pace
Trying to keep up with the rat race
Always in a hurried rush
Made the Little Bird look like mush

I'm sorry Little Bird for what i did
I feel like a stinky squid
From now on i will watch my speed
For Little Birds are a dying breed

Lets give Little Birds some space
Before the Little Birds erase
It doesn't matter how fast we go
There will always be time for the next show

By the way:
I did pick up the Little Bird
Buried it, but couldn't say a word
I had a knot deep in my throat :[


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-06 01:23 AM


Very sensitive.  I like this  Joyce
1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-05-06 02:16 AM


awwwwwww im sorry.....helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-05-06 06:00 PM


The same thing happened to me the other day...I think birds liked it better when there weren't any cars and airplanes and baseballs...James
latin passion
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4 posted 2001-05-06 06:04 PM


If I may, concur with JamesMichael. Terrible gut feeling when it happens. But to have it replayed via BB - to much. LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

inot2B
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5 posted 2001-05-07 05:01 PM


I saw a birdie fall from his/her nest, maybe thought it could fly. Stayed on the ground with all the big birdies squalking about. Then I heard an awful sound, and saw a possum running away with little birdie in its mouth. Now thats how my day started!
Amature2
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6 posted 2001-05-07 06:42 PM


Joyce, Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.

1slick_lady, The Little Bird is not ok, but i will be. Thank you for stopping by.

James, How about all those golfers, always trying to hit the Birdies. Thanks for your comment.

Latin Passion, Yes it is a terrible thing. Thank you.

inot2b, Dang possum, I hope your day was not as bad as the Little Bird's day. Thanks

Thanks again Amature2

Parker
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7 posted 2001-05-08 03:02 PM


This happened to me last summer. I hit a crow. (bad omen there). There were two on the highway... far enough apart to drive inbetween. But I guess being so close to my car scared them and one flew off in the wrong direction towards me and hit my windshield. It bothered me the whole way home. Now I avoid birds on the road as much as possible.....

Nice write.

Parker

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