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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-05 01:04 PM



What Joy Is This ?

~*Marge Tindal*~

What joy is this that gently falls
to land as petals soft ~
Joy beyond compare is felt
when angels are aloft ~

On quiet winging - voices singing
fluttering hearts in love abound ~
Then upon a soft remember
angels touch so gently down ~


*For Martie ~
In sisterly remembering of your angel Michelle ~

*Lovely graphic by Anne Geddes*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-05 01:43 PM


***Beautiful***
Marge you soar beside the angels on high.

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2 posted 2001-05-05 01:56 PM


Then upon a soft remember.  I love that.  Your poem is beautiful.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-05-05 02:18 PM


A soft remembering, and you ARE such a good friend Marge.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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4 posted 2001-05-05 02:21 PM


This is simply beautiful, it's touching that you'd be willing to do something this sweet to commemorate an angel.  
How wonderful.  You've warmed my heart.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-05-05 05:19 PM


Amen, beautifully penned.
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6 posted 2001-05-05 05:23 PM


beautiful Marge as always....and there is so many warmth within. thanks for sharing my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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7 posted 2001-05-05 05:24 PM


Marge,

Very sweetly done.  Hugs...

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Martie
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8 posted 2001-05-05 05:25 PM


Marge--I have many angels in my life...some living and some not...thank you for remembering Michelle...and for being an earth angel yourself.  Hugs sis!
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9 posted 2001-05-05 09:34 PM


INot2B~
Just softly inspired - thank you.

Joyce~
Thank you so much.

Mysteria~
An 'angel' touched me today.

AllanR~
Thank you.  I like warm hearts.

Mike~
Thank you, friend.

Charisma~
Thank you for letting me share with you.

Michael~
Thank you ... I cherish *hugs*.

Martie~
Sweet Sis of my heart~
You know I thank her for this gentle kiss !
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mabel A. Dilley
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10 posted 2001-05-06 02:36 PM


Oh my! This brings a tear to my eyes. Beautiful and tender. Friendship demonstrated as it should be.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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11 posted 2001-05-06 04:20 PM


I remember my coming to this world by this sweet story...Lolo...

   thanx Marge

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12 posted 2001-05-06 09:53 PM


soft and so tender....thanks for this...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-05-06 10:42 PM


Julian~
I appreciate the reply and understand the tears.

Waseem~
I thank you for your sweet reply.

GreenEyes~
Pleased to share, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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