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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Forgive me if I depress anyone with this one maybe it should have been in dark passions but I thought it was suited for open.....enjoy though...Bye 4 now...J  I'm just sitting here alone trying to make sense of it all and I just can't figure it out how everything has gone wrong life in the back of my car not guided by the midnight star going nowhere fast tell me how long can it last? and I just sit and think got to find a question to all of the answers in my head fearing what the wise man said as he tried to read my mind the past holds the future in it's hands fate leads you into destiny's land holding on to what I desire burning the oil with no fire and I wonder who is left out there for me to admire no songs to touch my soul no smiles to help me grow just an empty space left there in my place how do I go on? what have I done wrong how does the world go on? and I don't want to think 'bout what's been going on lifes idiosyncrysies they have has begging down on our knees so I sit here all by myself watching that empty space over there that was my place and I miss my place my side of the world my center, my core I miss my corner of the earth now waiting for a new life to finally give birth and I don't think I can wait much more but I listen and I don't hear anyone knocking at my door...... Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 05-05-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wait another moment. . . an outpouring of emotion here Julie. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow, this is powerfully said. The emotions are vivid, the flow is exemplary. I truly enjoyed the read, but have no answers other than to decide not to care if one is alone. Hmm, that has a ring of "to settle" in it, I wonder if that's a good choice. |
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