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Spring Lights |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ Spring Lights ~*~We rode out to the country, And all the lights were green; Such springlike views were waiting, A welcome May day scene. But rain, soon for our outing, Came down in torrents dread; And it seems to us, on our homeward run, That all the lights were red! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Gotta tell ya, I had a hard time wanting to make a comment on this one. I WANTED TO STAY and listen to the music!!! Enjoyed the trio of media to present this poem. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Sounds like the story of my forgotten golf game. I don't know why they make up songs about raindrops, truly I want the spigott turned off for a while. Cute idea for a poem. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Really nice Mysteria. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ I LOVE the rain ... Thanks for a brief sprinkle of thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Virginia: Don't know what it is doing there, but we have had quite enough rain now, and yes, isn't the music fun! Thank you. Julian: ditto! Thanks for reading. Joyce: Thank you Marge: You LOVE the rain? Well you would LOVE Vancouver as you don't die here you rust away! He he - thanks for your cute comment. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Some outings are just like that, aren't they? I live in the country and you know what? There is only one light.  Enjoyed!Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Auguste: Well...from the mountains to the country for me is about 100 traffic lights, and it seemed getting home in that storm, it took forever, as the lights were not cooperating and were almost always red! He he, and boy, are you lucky to live in the country. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
beautiful, both the picture and the poem |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a divine write.....love the picture and the rain....thanks Mysteria... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Mysteria I enjoyed every word of this, thank you...Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Irish Rose, Green Eyes, and Suetang you are all so very kind for stopping in and reading this little dittie, and I am pleased you enjoyed it. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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