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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-05-04 07:37 PM

                 “THINGS I’LL NEVER SEE”
                                  by
                              Bill Charles
                                 ~~~~
I’ll never see your piercing eyes, as they gaze into mine,
        and the tenderness of your precious lips,
                as I come closer, to explore…
Your hair blowing in the breeze, I’ve seen it flowing,
        but I won’t see it now,
                like so very many times, before…

I’ll never see your silhouette, outlined in the moonlight,
        when I looked at you,
                standing there, under the stars…
Moonbeams came down, touching with their softness,
        and you were outlined in a halo,
                dancing, to sweet guitars…

I’ll never see your smile, with the gentleness of you,
        as I held you closer,
                and happiness, came from within…
It never stopped, as your lips met the passion, of mine,
        in a kiss that was deep,
                until skin, would meet skin…

Those sensuous moments, with closeness of only you,
        warmth coming from your heart,
                radianting warmly…
To go back in time once more, to the many happy days,
        so that I could look at once again,
                “Things I’ll Never See”…
                               ~~~~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-04 08:25 PM

Sometimes we can't go back, we can only go forward, this is sad.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2001-05-04 08:27 PM

I can relate, my man! Not recently (not in 30 years or so) but I can still relate and still feel. Good piece, my friend.

jwesley

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-05-04 08:29 PM

You will again see
the piecing gaze of me
when you come north again
we will an evening spend...

~Softsmiles
M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2001-05-04 11:07 PM

i know these sentiments all too well... if you are on this journey now, then good luck to you my friend...

descriptive write... enjoyed

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-05-05 02:29 AM

Irish Rose - yes, we can never go back, only forward. But we can look back, and only wish what might have been. Thanks for stopping by.

jwesley - it just never seems to go away, only stays. One forgets but it is still there. Appreciate your kind reply.

nakdthoughts - you are so very gentle and caring with what you say. Thank you, and my eyes will meet yours, perhaps again.

Ethan Halo - thank you very much for your words of encouragement. A lonely trail it is, one that will be taken and overcome.

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

6 posted 2001-05-06 01:28 PM

Bill

Your writing is very sad. Hopefully you have fond memories to remember.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

7 posted 2001-05-06 01:38 PM

You'll never walk alone with those around you who love you.

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2001-05-06 04:14 PM

Bill, your gentle ways and honest heart is winning many admirers I see, and so it should be.

Lyrical and beautiful my friend!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2001-05-06 10:13 PM

awww this is beautiful Bill....you brought back memories to me, with your pen....magic my friend...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

10 posted 2001-05-07 06:17 AM

Sounds like it is worth finding a way you can see it everyday. Hopefully you can find the happiness you and the lady in question deserve. Life is too short to live alone or unhappy. Good luck!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-05-07 09:18 AM

Heartfelt piece my friend and so sad written, penned from your heart.
excellent write.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

12 posted 2001-05-07 09:45 AM

Wow, this is an emotive, longing piece. I like it. It seems that you two will see each other yet again though.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2001-05-07 07:03 PM

Bill, you've really reached down with this one my friend. . . it's excellent. . . I too, know these feelings all too well. . . if only. . .

superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Taffetta
Junior Member

since 2001-02-26

Posts 27

14 posted 2001-05-07 08:39 PM

This is so sad and I feel it coming from your heart. You must have loved her very much and want to see her again just one more time. Follow your heart.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2001-05-09 12:05 PM

So much longing in this one, Bill... well done!

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