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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-05-04 02:55 PM


Setting sun lights west,
Unbraiding in growing dim,
Combing out the day.

Rising sun lights east,
Braiding and holding with pins,
Winding to the day.

Gloom


© Copyright 2001 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-05-04 03:19 PM


Setting sun lights west,
Unbraiding in growing dim,
Combing out the day.


Gray highlights of night
Shade the sun from the moon's glow
Aging into fade

Rising sun lights east,
Braiding and holding with pins,
Winding to the day.



M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-05-04 03:21 PM


knowing I would find one treasure...

being gifted with two...

my idea of a delightful afternoon!

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2001-05-04 03:30 PM


nice nice
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-05-04 03:32 PM


and another.......I use to love doing this with a close friend of mine..I hope you don't mind..but my day is kind of empty...

Setting sun lights west,
Unbraiding in growing dim,
Combing out the day.


Gray highlights of night
Shade the sun from the moon's glow
Aging into fade.

Rising sun lights east,
Braiding and holding with pins,
Winding to the day.


Morning light broken
Strands entangling, their hold
weaving memories.

Me again


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-04-2001).]

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