Come join me in dream land

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Open Poetry #13

Come join me in dream land

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

0 posted 2001-05-04 03:23 AM

My love,
As dawn creeps in...
I get ready to leave
to the sandman...
calling my name...
I say no...
One more...
Let me be with a little longer...

He gives a few moments longer,
to say my goodnights to my fair love.
Cast not that you leave him out in the cold.
For you will meet in that quiet sweet place
of dreams. Where all things are possible.

Come... Join me there....
I await....
my all and forever...
Spanish eyes awaits you there.

LP.

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-05-04 07:42 AM

You've captured a lovely melodic flow in this piece LP, very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-04 04:13 PM

~~ Kit~~ thank you for your kind words.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
With this she sleeps well... to all the sleep walkers & poets a goodnight.

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-05-05 05:26 PM

wonderful touch of love, love it very much

Charisma

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-05-05 06:06 PM

Enjoyed this poem...James

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-06-05 08:27 AM

this is so good!

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