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latin passion
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0 posted 2001-05-04 01:39 AM


Forty minutes till I see you..
this is the message I was greated with.
That was at the eight o'clock hour.
This is going to be hard..
I can see that!

Yes, I must have patience
I do...
But, forty minutes!
No way!
He waits...
I long to see him
For I see him longing
for me to lay beside,
hear each other breathing
in quietness.

Come on modern technology--
process those bites.
I can't wait,
what still 38 minutes to go!!!
Augh....
I feel like Charlie Brown. Frustrated
beyond words.

I wiggle the mouse,
P L E A S E....

Yes!
The welcome screen comes on...
Great custom installation.
She sees other quick modifications and browses...
CLICK HERE "NEXT"  OR...
to change the installation directory click here
with the option to cancel.

Life's choices...
I keep striving...
finding the right words to express
all to you.
I recepociate my love to you,
my wording may not always be as poetic,
But I pour all my emotions, words spoken
and unspoke are there.
On each and every line and in between.

She's trying to remain calm.
She moves, her mouse to the big "RED" arrow
N E X T...
as if he was speaking to her.
Yes - it's copying the cab files.
It's finished

What???
The publisher cannot bet determind due to problems below.

This is where most women would say "where were you?I need you now."

Does she click yes or no,
Can you guess...
Of course she'll say YES!
She wants to get to her true love NOW!!!
She's looked forward ALL day to listen and hear
his thoughts. She longs to tell him of her ideas.
For she couldn't wait to talk to him in their private room!!!

Pleasse.... let it work I've already waited 40 min.
Ahhh...just ingore the zone alarm..
We're beyond all reasons now.

Hurrah, her sign comes on
"Installation complete"

Now here 1:00 she's has sent alarms, messages,
flags, rockets et al..
Knock, knock,
knock, knock.

She looks for reasons
why is it not working.
For she knows and trusts him
he'd not leave and abandon her out in the cold.
No, that is not HIM.  So, she's NOT considering it.

So, my friends
my anticipated walk with my soul mate
won't happen tonight...
For here at least she knows he near,
not giving up their ship
for he's her all.

I thank you for letting me sound off,
for I mean no offense to any person,
especially those who are computer proficient.
Those I definitely admire.

My love,
I seek YOU,
for exhaustion, ever so slowly
creaks up on me. I wish I was on
Pacific time zone. I will fix the problem
tomorrow, so when I return in 2 days hence, I will be running, no sprinting into your open arms.
It will be hard on me as with you, not being together.

My love and all...
I Love you...
LP
~~these words are felt, not just said~~~

He is my pen, I am but the paper he
writes on.
~~3LW~~SM

© Copyright 2001 LP - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-05-04 02:21 AM


I'm pretty dense I guess.  I really don't know what is going on here. I'm not computer literate.  Joyce
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By the sea
2 posted 2001-05-05 05:03 PM


It sounds to me like you were trying to download a program for a private chat room.  Am I correct?  I wish you luck and hope you two can get together soon...I could certainly sense the frustration in this.  Take care.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida
3 posted 2001-05-05 09:05 PM


Cute and clever, good luck on the download.
latin passion
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4 posted 2001-05-06 01:49 PM


To all: thank you so much for entering. To the point of frustration, no.  But the party I was speaking to - understands that there are times, I could use his help.  My HORRORscope that day - don't even attempt. LP
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2001-05-06 10:01 PM


neat little write, I know how frustrating it can be sometimes... hugs to you...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Watersign6
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Hurricane,WV
6 posted 2001-06-05 08:24 AM


i wrote one about trying to get online and this poem you wrote reminded me of mine a little bit,i enjoyed  
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