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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
She Dances when he speaks she smiles when he's near she glows does everyone know? she loves him just one whisper from his lips one caress from his poetic fingertips & she dances she sings she glows, doesn't everybody know? ~Tier{R.T.} fall '98 |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Soft and breezy, like the gentle waving of a delicate hand. Lovely work. Coal |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Coal, *smiles* ~Tier |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If they don't know they will...this is lovely!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
everyone knows now Tier. . .  wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Elegantly simple and direct. Wonderful. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
R.T. I tried e-mailing the following message to you and it was not deliverable. I hate to put it here, but, alas, here it is: R.T. Thanks for visiting my "Longing" glad you enjoyed a chuckle. I have to tell you of my aching, two other poems I wrote this week-end that hold much more meat, are sinking down the board. I'd love it if you'd drop down to them and give me your views. Virginia VAS |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
R.T. I thought this was the same untitled that I replied to earlier this week. It looks familiar, but I don't see any other reply by me to it, save the e-mail that I couldn't get to you. I really like it, it's powerful and vivid though short. It's so familiar, is a rewrite of a longer one you posted a day or so ago? Or am I losing it? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
R.T. I thought this was the same untitled that I replied to earlier this week. It looks familiar, but I don't see any other reply by me to it, save the e-mail that I couldn't get to you. I really like it, it's powerful and vivid though short. It's so familiar, is a rewrite of a longer one you posted a day or so ago? Or am I losing it? Is this overkill, or what? Something's amiss with this forum at the moment. [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
if his fingertips are poetic, they know! they know! Kathleen Blake |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ah, yes...sometimes we think we're so transparent, as if everyone knows what's going on in our hearts! Wonderful poem, Tier! sp  to be with you... |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
and shouldn't they, tho'? if they have ever been there... nice capture of those wonderful feelings, unstated. \\ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a lovely melodic flow to this Tier, I enjoyed your sentiments, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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