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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-05-03 05:50 PM


Thanks R.J. for telling me about the original post!

In A Heartbeat

In a heartbeat I would fly into your arms if you opened them for me
I want you so very much you see
I can no longer take just being friends, speaking to each other every now and then
I want to feel the heat of your touch on my body, let me rise in ecstasy.
Open your soul and let me peek inside, what secrets do you hide?
I want to ride with you on the turbulent tides of passion
Never ending love I feel for you
Oh my love, this I say is true
Open your arms and in a heartbeat, I will be with you


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JLR
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1 posted 2001-05-03 05:59 PM


Your sweet heart will find the right arms...stretched wide!  Very nice write, Laura.
walker
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2 posted 2001-05-03 06:15 PM


This is very romantic and honest, thanks for sharing!
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3 posted 2001-05-04 12:57 PM


I remember this one Laura. . . never give up. . .  

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4 posted 2001-05-04 05:16 PM


Very nice.. glad you reposted it!

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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5 posted 2001-05-04 07:12 PM


Very romantic and touching!!  
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6 posted 2001-05-06 11:46 AM


Laura-

so good to see you in love. it looks well on you. glad you've found some happiness...been a bumpy ride!

take care of yourself.
aim  

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."  


ParisGrl
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7 posted 2001-05-07 02:45 PM


R.J.

I hope so......:-)

Amy,

Thanks for your reply but I think it looks better on you.  LOL  
Take  care of yourself and e-mail me sometime.
To all the rest of you who replied,

thanks very much for reading.....i'm glad you all enjoyed it.

Laura

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