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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-03 05:17 PM



Easily we fell in love,
with fragile minds and new hearts.
Simplicity stretched her hand,
and you captured me with your smile.
My loneliness was your allied,
it pushed right towards you.
Our hearts entwined,
while passion played its part.
We conquered solitude,
Forever being together.
Loving each other so much.
While we promise to each other,
total surrender.

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-05-03 05:39 PM


Simplicity stretched her hand....

what a very love thought, indeed!

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-03 05:48 PM


Walker, such soft caring words you write. For you touched... ME
LP

He is my pen, I am but the paper he
writes on.
~~3LW~~SM

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
3 posted 2001-05-03 05:54 PM


Nice. Very nice.

"Our hearts entwined,"


Beautiful imagery...

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