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Marine Push
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Marine Push |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Marine Push Fog smooths early through the town; Cool and easy, As though a woman's slip Before it warms with the day's motion. The ground responds, Maps Precisely like a quilt, The coordinates where curves cross; Here a farm, There a brook tripping over itself Like a clutch of boys pushing adolesence. Just beyond The look of silk Pillows up against a mound Known to contain a community of alders. All day long The fog obscures What's going on. RMW |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh Bob, I must put a copy in my favorites, in fact I must print one out on the designer paper that will befit it. Don't know if the perfect one's been made yet, though. The images and textures you've crafted here are supurb. I absolutely love the brook tripping over itself! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Hi Neighbor...and thanks much. Hope all is going well. Bob |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob...This is beautiful!!!!! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
"Like a clutch of boys pushing adolesence." Give me break! Oh, how I wish I had such words to create an equal snapshot. I love it!Perhaps I should give up being a poet and arrive on your door step as a student. Wow! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, this more than certainly will either cause one to put a pen down and applaud...and leave the pen down... or after the applaud, make every valiant attempt to pick it up once again, and try a little harder... a keeper...for life. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Echo all of the above, Robere *smiles* ~Tier |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Super wonderful. Joyce |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Captivating imagery, drawing in for a closeup... Core |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie....Hello again....and thank you much. Bob Julian and Sunshine....If you two even hint and depriving Poetry at large, let alone Passions, of your fine work....I'll.....well...I will. Too kind. Thank you. Bob Tier, Joyce and Corinne...thank you. PS Tier....speaking of Paris....(smiles). |
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