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Passnot
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since 2000-01-22
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0 posted 2001-05-03 08:17 AM


my satisfaction upon life's thrills
controls the urgency of instant kills
fast alive to wake for undying dreams
wishing so much for what it seems

she's above for what i hope to be true
pattern by self loathing clue
earlier shadows give away time
masking herself as the mime

remembering history fails at perfections
hesitant to endeavor corrections
still to love with stabbing blindness
always condemned for measured kindness

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latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-04 03:12 AM


Please pull the knife out...One does not intentially hurt love. LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

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