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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-05-02 03:38 PM



Tired

Do you really know me
my innermost, my soul
the core of my heart

Do you really know me
my pain and suffering
behind my smile

Do you really know me
behind my tearfull eyes
locked inside

Do you really know me?

No,

You don’t know me,
because you only
see me your way

You don’t want to know
my inner me
my soul
my tears make you mad
my weakness
is a thorn in your eyes
being hard
is what you prefer

But that’s not me
and the time
coming near
that I will
disappear

Cause I’m tired
so tired
tired
to be not me.

Charisma
~*TMP*~
02/05/01

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-03-2001).]

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KokoStewartKoomoa
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1 posted 2001-05-02 04:22 PM


tired and yes we don't know you ,but what I do know of you, I can truly say you are delightful and you loved. Hugs dear Charisma

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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2 posted 2001-05-02 06:38 PM


just be yourself my friend. . . that's all we ask. . .

wonderful. . . nice to see you back. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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3 posted 2001-05-02 06:40 PM


You know you and I trust you know a very nice person in yourself.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-02 06:58 PM


find that inner core, and you will be refreshed and don't let anyone take it away from you!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Charisma
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5 posted 2001-05-03 01:10 PM


Thank you all for your warm support and that you allow  me here to be myself. you are all wonderful people, with your heart on the right place.

love ya all
Charisma

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