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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-05-02 10:43 AM



The hours between night and day,
those hours, I played lady of the night
star-breathed passions bloomed.

I played the finely rigged patrol line
on the other side of this age
where flames burst at noon.

Fire in the sun jasmine.
Was I that blossom
caught in your rich voice?

Riding shadows of conquering air,
those hour between night and day
my neck became a petition.

Graphics: Jim Warren
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"I am not now that which I have been."

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1 posted 2001-05-02 02:35 PM


Oh my!  Click Julian Lester...and there it was...Wow!  I was not expecting this senual piece but what a delightful one it was, and of course my favorite line was the last.  One of your best in my mind!  I loved this one, and the art complimented it beautifully.

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2 posted 2001-05-02 04:28 PM


very very sensual and what an absolute delight. I love the romantic poems and you penned it so very well. Loved the line:
Fire in the sun jasmine.
Was I that blossom
caught in your rich voice?
WOW!!!!!

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3 posted 2001-05-02 04:57 PM


So very pretty in every way.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-05-02 05:03 PM


Yes, pretty, Julian.  I loved the magical feel to this.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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5 posted 2001-05-02 06:32 PM


wonderful Julian. . . quiet with just that subtle touch. . .  

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6 posted 2001-05-02 07:13 PM


this is expressive imagery at the best I've read in a long time!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-05-03 02:29 PM


Thank you all for such generous comments. Re-reading this poem; however, proves to me that I truly do not normally write love poems, and in all truth, probably should not delve into a genre that has wonderful voices
such as yourselves.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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