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Passnot Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18 |
When I last talked to my love She tells me goodbye From day to day without reply My emptied heart has no more warmth Missing "my everything" in my life I cry myself to sleep with a knife Will I ever see the glimmer in her eyes The love story that was not by the book Only heard and read, but never by look Without feelings on paper Much life has left my heart Mind and soul ripped apart So now I lie to wait I scream for a releasing ending Why am I concerned with only winning |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Passnot...Thanks for sharing. We sometimes look too near. I'm told that when the Marines are trained in night firing, they are instructed to not look directly at the target...but slightly to left or right. The same holds true for seeimg a dim star in the night sky. Give it a try. You may be surprised at how love, or friendship, even unrequited, perks right up. Smiles. Bob |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Passnot, I concer with RMW: give her a chance, for a "love story that was not by the book; Only heard and read, but never by look." Without feelings on paper" "Why am I concerned with only winning." You already won. The heart grows warmer, give it a chance. LP |
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