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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-05-02 01:12 AM


Aging Perks
Virginia Salter

In my local bank
there is a free account
for people over fifty
to stay a bill’s surmount

It has a special name
to make one feel so fine
The name puts those of us
in a lovely frame of mind

Instead of dubbing seniors
as those over the hill
it gives us a finer handle
a lovelier, nicer bill

For rather than being old,
decrepit, elderly
we are given “Prime Time”
by which to get no fee.

Yes, I’m in my Prime Time dears
no need to rave or boast
I’m in my Prime Time dears
now raise with me a toast!


©April  26,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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1 posted 2001-05-02 01:16 AM


here, here...I raise my glass, for I am not far behind. LP
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-02 08:45 AM


I need to find this bank!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


PoeticKnight
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3 posted 2001-05-02 09:12 AM


Prime Time! LOL Great poem. Here's me raising a glass...
RMW
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4 posted 2001-05-02 09:45 AM


Virginia...."here, here"...or is it "hear, hear"? Never do get that right. Anyway...well said. Bob
Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-05-02 09:45 AM


Loved the poem, Virginia, here's to you and good health!

*smiles*
~Tier

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6 posted 2001-05-02 12:38 PM


interesting poem....i very much enjoyed the original sentiments
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Member Rara Avis
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7 posted 2001-05-02 12:43 PM


Prime Time.  Right on!!!!  Joyce
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8 posted 2001-05-02 01:41 PM


....almost there....

with smiles!

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