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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-05-01 10:07 PM




Natural Phenomenon

The thunder rolls across the valley
heard is  the approaching storm,
winds steadily picking  up
the air is no longer warm.

Flashes seen from  lightening
brilliant colors in the skies
trees now bowing to the winds
winds sing out their warning cries.

I see the ominous storm
lightening and  thunder crashes
the air now midly chilling
sending out angry lashes.

The storms once high  raging winds
now slowly turns into calm,
and once again earth has viewed
natural phenomenon.

©dmsmith 04-08-2000




On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-01-2001).]

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latin passion
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1 posted 2001-05-01 10:10 PM


head me to the shelter. Powerful lines.We must be getting close to hurricane/tornado season. LP
Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2001-05-01 10:14 PM


Very descriptive.  Joyce
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-05-01 10:16 PM


With the spring time comes the showers LP.  Thanks for stopping in.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-05-01 10:16 PM


Thanks Joyce, I tried to capture it the way that it happened that day.  *s

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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