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latin passion
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0 posted 2001-05-01 05:03 PM


Turn around and see-
Just the two of us
no one else will hear, or see-
we're all alone.
The only sound you'll hear
are the sweet whisper--
I say into your ear.

So close your eyes and
you'll see it's not a dream-
transport yourself here with me,
now and forever we'll be soul mates.
Go the distance, close your eyes--
and I'll be there.

Take my hand, touch my inner core -
you are my sunshine of what others can not find-
this secret place of who I am.
Feel the heat increase in intensity -
ever so slowly.

Touch the inner ME - close your eyes...

© Copyright 2001 LP - All Rights Reserved
jellybeans
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1 posted 2001-05-01 05:32 PM


very nice....that special connection...it is hard to find...and hard to put into words...you have done it very nicely  
latin passion
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2 posted 2001-05-01 05:46 PM


Jellybean** A small piece of me - thank you for your kind words. With each small token I leave behind - speaks of me.
Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-01 07:08 PM


this is when you know it's right. . . when you can look and see the person inside. . .

wonderful lp. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2001-05-01 08:19 PM


latin passion - you write words of beauty, never faltering, just with a care from a soft heart. I was inspired by 'Three Little Words' and wrote another. But the finishing touches are still being made, and will post when complete. Thank you, for this.

BC

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-05-01 08:30 PM


that inner core is a sacred place, be careful who you let in!  I enjoyed this.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


DawnG
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6 posted 2001-05-01 08:33 PM


I enjoyed this very much. It was very beautiful.

                   Dawn

latin passion
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7 posted 2001-05-01 09:30 PM


To all, I'm sure you all will be glad that my eyes have finally seen the "light." Three Little Words" stop sign could not have been any bigger.
Sven~ your right when all is pefect... for BC is one of the few who has had a brief glimpse of the real me.  Thank you trying to steer the course when I traveled the wrong road.
Irish Rose~~ many of your poems hit to close to home. I am the gatekeeper of my core, but one person held the correct key.  He is my pen. The master of my strokes.
DawnG~~ thank you for your kind words.  All things are possible.  

Before I add my final note to BC - I have one that is not here....
SEA~~ thank you so very much, and my humble gratitude for being there when he needed you. You defended his honor, and your tribute to him, more of us needs friends like you- I fully understood the lines and what you wanted to convey.

Finally, and upmost, ~~BC~~, in the time we have been together, my heart fluttered when I read "three little words" again. For the past few days, on my undying search, so that I could express all my feelings I held close to my heart.  I know you were always close by, to make sure I didn't falter- yet ready to pick me up if I fell. So I close my eyes, awaiting for you to touch me...love me as I am. All my heart felt love ~~ LP

JLR
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8 posted 2001-05-01 09:57 PM


Could feel the heat in this one!  Great emotional, spiritual write.  
Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-05-01 10:14 PM


It is so nice when you know that the connection has been made LP.  This was well thought and written.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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10 posted 2001-05-01 10:19 PM


A nice happy poem.  Joyce
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11 posted 2001-05-02 01:19 AM


such a tender romantic piece, well done!!!
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12 posted 2001-05-02 04:13 AM


Only you know it is right and the time to invite someone to really know you LP think you are there!  Nice job.

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13 posted 2001-05-02 08:38 PM


Soul Mates...Soul Friends..
All are beautiful as well as your poem here is.  

Rosebud1229
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14 posted 2001-05-03 12:02 PM


Latin, beautiful, it does take that connection to really look inside to get to know the other person then comes the light.
latin passion
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15 posted 2001-05-04 05:48 PM


~~JLR * thank you

~~Gentle Spirit* the LP relationsship great idea. thanks for the smile.

~~Joyce* thank you

~~VAS* Definite a "Love me Tender" song

~~Mysteria** Better than "Return to Sender..."

~~Temptress* How about "??Kentuky Fires?" words excape...me right now. "I can feel my temperature rising..." thank you

~~Rosebud1229* "I'll Never Walk Alone..."

with that statement...I'll never walk alone.

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

SEA
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16 posted 2001-05-14 07:01 PM


"Before I add my final note to BC - I have one that is not here....
SEA~~ thank you so very much, and my humble gratitude for being there when he needed you. You defended his honor, and your tribute to him, more of us needs friends like you- I fully understood the lines and what you wanted to convey."


What.....exactly...........do you mean? And what are you referring to? SEA

vandana
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17 posted 2001-05-14 07:16 PM


enjoy
Watersign6
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18 posted 2001-06-05 08:12 AM


loving spiritual emotional intimate and i enjoyed it very much  
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