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latin passion
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0 posted 2001-05-01 12:30 PM


You and Me
Me and You
The only one for me
is you.

You've felt my tears
absorbed them well--
You've heard my unspoken pleas,
and prayers.

You've been there
since I was a little girl,
and watched me grow.
I've haven't perfected being who I am,
As I embarked on each and every journey.

But now that I'm older,
and somewhat wiser.
I can't discard you
threads shreaded and sadly woren.

I know I need to go on a new venture
and buy a new bear to hug--
to absorb my tears and hear my pleas.

I need to hug and snuggle one so warm,
so I can whisper all my secrets to,
not in discord, for I know you won't tell.

How I can't bring myself to replace you,
for you are dear to my heart.
You've brought me from my darkness
into daylight.
To start afresh to dawns new light.

Come let me hug you...



© Copyright 2001 LP - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-01 12:33 PM


This is darling.  I have my doll from childhood.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-01 12:47 PM


this is wonderful!
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-05-01 05:03 PM


How pretty!  
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4 posted 2001-05-01 08:37 PM


This is very sweet. I have still a teddy bear that an ex boyfriend gave me. Fuzzy and I've been through so much together that I doubt I can ever bear to give him up.

                                    Dawn

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5 posted 2001-05-01 09:24 PM


LatinPassion~
Reminiscent nostalgic moments~
Wonderfully done.
~*Marge*~

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latin passion
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6 posted 2001-05-01 09:52 PM


I attempted this past Sunday to find a new bear to hug. To say, I walked out of several store empty handed. For none stood out that could take "Teddie" place.  I plan to make a Bear room, and of course there will be a place of honor to Teddie.  I know some of you are going "Ahh, come on - it's a girl thing."  no, ask your parents - we all hold something dear to us. So to all -- thank your reading my poem and bring back memories whether happy or sad - Teddies and dolls alike will be there.

Joyce~dolls that is another story - please do write.
Irish Rose~ Again, I admire rose in and given name.  Thank you - your wonderful.
DawnG~Hugs especially to you.  Fuzzy,hears all. Hugs back to you.
Marge~MUCHO GRACIAS, MI AMIGA, GRACIAS, GRACIAS. Sometime I'll tell that story as well.
XX()()() and a big hug to BC.

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-05-02 08:14 PM


latin passion - soft, tender, nice......

BC

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8 posted 2001-05-02 08:25 PM


sweet memories....love this....


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
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JLR
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9 posted 2001-05-02 08:54 PM


How cute...why would you even try to replace him?  btw---what is the 'k' poem in your response to me?
latin passion
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10 posted 2001-05-04 05:36 PM


~~Greeneyes~~ softness speaks so sweetly, thank you to you.

~~JLR* Could not replace even if I tried!

~~BC~~ - my all, for I know you're there beside me, steadfast and supportive. thank you sweet one~~
LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Watersign6
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11 posted 2001-06-05 08:34 AM


i remember my little teddy bear that i wouldnt let my mom discard and it was pretty
worn out but i loved it so  

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