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Missing You
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Missing You |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I miss you I miss your voice, your smile your kind & gentle humor I miss your warmth, your beautiful face I miss your honesty, sincerity, & genuine willingness to help others I miss the ease in which you go through each day I miss you I miss your strong hands So large, capable I miss your presence just knowing you're around is enough to make my day My heart is torn, twisting inside afraid of what it feels, afraid of what that means I only know that when you are near I'm better, when you are not, it hurts so much So, I'm telling you now no matter what it means I miss you much, I miss you deeply I need to see you, feel you, inhale you, talk to you, tell you these simple words: I MISS you... ~Tier{R.T.} 5/97 |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Tier....You should share this with the source of inspiration in 1997. A lovely poem. Bob |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Robere, you are far too kind! *smiles* ~Tier |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Do you still miss this person? I hope they know.. Beautiful poem. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tier, this is wonderful. . . I think that we all feel like this about someone. . . excellent my friend. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written missing very well! *S* |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This is very relevant to me at the moment and I understand the feelings, you portray them very well. Thank you Olias. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sandra. I suppose I do still miss him, but not on the same level. Sven, I believe you are right. Thank you for reading! *smiles* Thank you, Suthern, thank you for letting me know that I've accomplished my goal! *smiles* Olias, If nothing else, you know that I understand. *hugs* Thank you for reading and commenting... ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It is amazing that we can go so long, and suddenly, this "pull" comes back, and we miss anew... a very good write... |
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