Open Poetry #13 |
A Natural Plan |
Robulus Junior Member
since 2001-05-01
Posts 11 |
A Natural Plan by Robin Spiteri. With eyes so deeply blue a beacon in the light, cheeks a rosy red, a passionate fire that burns so bright, a love of life so enduring a friendly nature thus ensuring an audience for my song. But it is for you that this poem belongs. These simple parts of you and more, ensnare me to your will, keeps me up, and with effortless skill, tears up my thoughts and mind until, shapes and patterns, a myriad of colours impress upon me and I'm sure upon others, a grand and masterful design. An idea so outstanding, it must have been used in romancing the beauties of before. And so I put my pen to paper, I collect my thoughts and now endever a theme, a song of life to sever, a mystery to explore. 'Til songs of hope and joy come unbidden to the fore. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Robin! What a beautiful and flowing first post, very lovely sentiments indeed ... I hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice indeed - Welcome to Passions... I look forward to reading more of your work... Check your email for a special greeting... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I loved it. Many thoughts went into it. I look forward to more. e-mail sent. LP |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Robulus, Wonderful first post, welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Please continue to put "pen to paper", it is a pleasure to read. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful Poem, Robin, Excellent writting! And W*E*L*C*O*M*E to passions! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Robulus Junior Member
since 2001-05-01
Posts 11 |
Thanks everyone, made me feel very welcome. I'll put up another few over the next few days - then I guess I'll get back to work. (So watch this space) (0: Rob |
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