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Robulus
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since 2001-05-01
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0 posted 2001-05-01 07:09 AM


A Natural Plan
by Robin Spiteri.

With eyes so deeply blue
a beacon in the light,
cheeks a rosy red,
a passionate fire that burns so bright,
a love of life so enduring
a friendly nature thus ensuring
an audience for my song.
But it is for you that this poem belongs.

These simple parts of you and more, ensnare me to your will,
keeps me up, and with effortless skill,
tears up my thoughts and mind until,
shapes and patterns, a myriad of colours
impress upon me and I'm sure upon others,
a grand and masterful design.


An idea so outstanding,
it must have been used in romancing
the beauties of before.
And so I put my pen to paper,
I collect my thoughts and now endever
a theme, a song of life to sever, a mystery to explore.
'Til songs of hope and joy come unbidden to the fore.

© Copyright 2001 Robulus - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-05-01 07:12 AM


Welcome to Passions Robin!  What a beautiful and flowing first post, very lovely sentiments indeed ... I hope to read more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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2 posted 2001-05-01 07:36 AM


Very nice indeed - Welcome to Passions... I look forward to reading more of your work... Check your email for a special greeting...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-05-01 08:25 AM


Welcome to Passions!
latin passion
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4 posted 2001-05-01 08:55 AM


I loved it.  Many thoughts went into it. I look forward to more. e-mail sent. LP
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
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5 posted 2001-05-01 09:10 AM


Hi Robulus,

Wonderful first post, welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
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6 posted 2001-05-01 09:21 AM


Please continue to put "pen to paper", it is a pleasure to read.

****WELCOME****


Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
7 posted 2001-05-01 10:06 AM


Beautiful Poem, Robin, Excellent writting! And W*E*L*C*O*M*E to passions!

*smiles*
~Tier

Robulus
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since 2001-05-01
Posts 11

8 posted 2001-05-01 11:19 AM


Thanks everyone, made me feel very welcome.
I'll put up another few over the next few
days - then I guess I'll get back to work.
(So watch this space)
(0:
Rob

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