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My love |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Here's a piece of nonsense I just penned.  Enjoy.-mpc My love You. Early morning sickness: salvation. With your dark skin, steamy vision. Bitterness made creamy clean. Warm surging. You. Connect thoughts never met; heart races, Slows. Some stains, surely. Surely some stains. But I feel so clean that I don't notice. I refuse to notice. With a taste of you, the sight of you coalescing and turning -- turning to find all the details rich and deep, like liquid dreams. Oh, my love. My cup of coffee. We must never part. You are always. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 04-30-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
These are nice little thoughts. Not nonsense at all. Joyce |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I have to admit, I had to look coalescing up in the dictionary. Thank you for teaching me a new word. Love my coffee in the morning to help get me going. Don't drink it any other time. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ LOVE IT ! Coffee AND your impromptu penning ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all enjoyed. And no poet should ever have to look up a big word. |
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