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Passions Voice
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0 posted 2001-04-30 06:50 PM


The sun sets again
And I think of your soft smile
Knowing I am loved

The sun rises now
And I feel your warmth near me
You know I love you

passion is life. . . ~Diana


© Copyright 2001 Diana Athena - All Rights Reserved
painted lady
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1 posted 2001-04-30 07:10 PM


Nice soft and warm pair!
Sunsets and sunrises are good haiku generators.

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.          Wm Wordsworth  (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

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2 posted 2001-04-30 07:15 PM


Lovely little Haiku's.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 04-30-2001).]

windwarrior_RJ
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3 posted 2001-04-30 07:22 PM


very lovely
RJ


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4 posted 2001-05-01 07:44 PM


These are excellent PV. . . really like them. . .  

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5 posted 2001-05-02 12:14 PM


soft tender feel to them...write on!
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6 posted 2001-05-02 05:39 PM


like this
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7 posted 2001-05-02 06:44 PM


Very nice sentiments expressed well.
Passions Voice
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8 posted 2001-05-02 07:23 PM


Thanks to everyone that has replied, I appreciate your comments.  

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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