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Sven
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0 posted 2001-04-30 01:18 PM


quietly,
she tells the stories
of a life once lived
of a heart twice broken
of a love thrice fulfilled

softly,
she sings the songs
of a girl once born
of a woman twice loved
of a mother thrice blessed

tenderly,
she writes the words
of a poet once inspired
of a writer twice published
of an author thrice read

once quietly she tells
twice softly she sings
thrice tenderly she writes
and four all time
we read

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-30 01:54 PM


How well you know your poets....and how soft and tenderly this reads....

another well done, well deserved...

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2 posted 2001-04-30 03:34 PM


I wish I had your knowledge, for it would help in my discord. The music still playing, very so slowly although not off chord. I loved your poetic charm.  LP
Corinne
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3 posted 2001-04-30 03:48 PM


Wow, Sven! You sure know how to make a woman's day!

This is very sweet, thank you so much!

Cor

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4 posted 2001-04-30 08:08 PM


This is another excellent choice for your gallery, Sven Pen.   Cor is a wonderful lady and someone I consider a great friend. All you say here about her is beautiful and true.  

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-04-30 08:14 PM


What a nice tribute to Corinne.  Joyce
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6 posted 2001-04-30 10:10 PM


I have read, though not so much as you...that will change now.  Thank you!
KokoStewartKoomoa
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7 posted 2001-04-30 10:12 PM


Yes Sven, your charm is only inhanced by your sensitive expression of poetry and your wonderful dedications to people with a heart of gold. I always enjoy, not only your words,but your spirit as well.
thanks, Koko

Mabel A. Dilley
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8 posted 2001-04-30 10:47 PM


Wonderful dedication, speaks to the spirit of writing so well. Good job.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-04-30 10:53 PM


Sven~

She is all that and more ...
and to top it all off .... a real sweetheart !

Nice write for a deserving lady.
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2001-04-30 11:30 PM


softly and so tenderly you write....your words inspire....


Lauren~


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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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Sven
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11 posted 2001-05-01 01:10 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful words. . .  

Corinne, I'm glad that you enjoyed this. . . I have found you and your words to indeed be quite wonderful and I hope that both of you will be with us for a long time. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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