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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2001-04-30 12:39 PM


You
Me
How did we get here?
Did you notice?
Every time you left?
I had to hold back a tear?
Talking for hours
Chemistry
Intellect
2 minds connect
Fooling myself
What everyone could guess
I couldn't pretend
You're just what I needed
To help my heart mend
Passion before promises
Is so easily felt
Closer without it
Makes it all the better
When we find it
In your company
I become
Somehow complete
And I have to tell you
You will always ENLIGHTEN ME....
Just promise me always
That 1st in all
You'll be my friend
And the rest to it
Our hearts shall tend...


Julie  


[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 04-30-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-04-30 12:51 PM


and you never know what might happen. . .

excellent Julie. . .  

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latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
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2 posted 2001-04-30 03:54 PM


I loved this....for I could relate.LP
inot2B
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3 posted 2001-04-30 04:36 PM


"Just promise me always
That 1st in all
You'll be my friend
And the rest to it
Our hearts shall tend..."


Very well said, I enjoyed this very much.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-04-30 04:37 PM


JulieAnn...it's been awhile since I've seen your pretty face...welcome home....
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