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Open Poetry #13

Threads of Life

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-30 01:48 AM

A web of life is woven in time,
Different threads are desired to complete it,
Hope, much loved of all threads-
Is selected the most,

Today I can’t locate it,
How must I finish this web?
I wait for proposals-
From others like me,

chaos fetches his favorite thread,
peace not far back advises a few,
violence twines within my work,
devil comes with his metallic red,

Now the web is absolute,
all the votes accounted for,
now begins a new one,
hope lost once more.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-04-30 01:50 AM

i like this alot yuh hope lost is a great theme and its woven well in this write!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-30 02:10 AM

Yes this is good. I hope you can weave Hope into your next one. Love Joyce

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-30 07:19 PM

for the next one, hope will "hopefully" not die.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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