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walker
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0 posted 2001-04-29 06:07 PM



Jesus asked Simon Peter,
three times, do you love me?
Jesus knew that Simon Peter loved him.
But he also knew that loving is not easy.
True love is total commitment.
True love is complete loyalty.
True love is to surrender.
In order to love you have to be humble,
because love is constantly tested.
Loving brings many risks and causes grief.
But ultimately,
loving sets you free and that's enough for me.
Do you love?
How much?
Is it enough to withstand the wind when it blows?
Do you love me? Jesus asked Simon Peter,
knowing the answer.



© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-29 06:13 PM


This is a nice and wise poem.  Joyce
JLR
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2 posted 2001-04-30 01:06 AM


My response in two different realms would come down to humility...in one I am, in the other i'm afraid, I am not.  Deep thought!
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3 posted 2001-05-01 02:55 PM


Walker,

I know the story well.  A good write and one of wisdom.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2001-05-01 02:59 PM


really cool write yuh I like it
inot2B
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5 posted 2001-05-01 03:04 PM


YES YES YES when it counts I hope I will be able to withstand the wind when it blows.
Enjoyed your poem very much.

latin passion
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6 posted 2001-05-01 03:10 PM


to give it conditionally...LP
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