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Hypnotic/Erotic
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Hypnotic/Erotic |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Dance by the light of the full gypsy moon... Passionate swaying to love’s transient tune... Bodies surrender while hearts all take flight... On a hypnotic/erotic night... Two partners meeting in secret display, of shared intermingling, and games they both play... Touching with lips, fire-hot in their taste... In a hypnotic/erotic space... Both have a partner who never will dance... Both are aware of the desperate chance... Both forget all as they gaze into eyes... Of their hypnotic/erotic prize... Time is of essence...but time is no more... Dancing and swaying on love’s sacred floor... Two become one, and the one becomes all... At the hypnotic/erotic Ball... Dawn is approaching, and dancing must cease... Reality brings with it ways to increase their hopelessness...but in their hearts it will stay all their hypnotic/erotic play... And next time they dance to the full gypsy moon, their passionate swaying will write a new tune... For magic has destined their love to live on, after their worlds and their bodies are gone... Their hearts will be joined in eternity’s flight, through their hypnotic/erotic night... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Beautifully rhythmical story unfolds and the the curtain falls. I'm glad they have eternity. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
thank you, Julian... Where there is the seed of love, there is the chance it will grow into love eternal... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This poem has everything. I love the mesmerizing rhythm. Jooyce |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Eternal love...certainly a prize worth having, indeed. I hope they make it.  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Dance is really making love isn't it? Only vertical! I enjoyed readin this so much. Kathleen Blake |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
You are an amazing writer. I have loved all of your poems that I have read so far. This one is no exception! Can't wait to read more! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Joyce ~~~ If you love this rhythm, then you are a gypsy in your soul, and will find yourself one day enjoying the music around the fire, and dancing to it!!! thank you!!!! ~~~ Amuse_mi ~~~ Yes...it is not impossible to find, and hold within our hearts, and I believe they will have it for eternity, for true love never really dies.....thank you!!!! ~~~ Irish Rose ~~~ To dance is to make love, in the eyes of the gypsies, as that is how it was passed down to me. Dancing is as ancient as the earth itself, and magic in it's expression...thank you!!!! ~~~Blaec ~~~ I thank you, my new friend, and I also enjoy your work! I know we will share many happy hours of reading and writing in the future! Thank you so much!!!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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