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Amuse_mi
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0 posted 2001-04-29 12:50 PM


The numbness moved
From arm to fingers
To hips, to linger
In parts without warn-
Each day a different ache.
Yet, I spied
Beneath her stoop
Within her ancient eyes
A glimpse of youth
Days of joy and play
Now spurned in deadness.

Courting an aged man
Attached and wealthy
A man called "Red"
Who bought her cigarettes
And paid her rent
It was how she graced her day.
I loved her then
And bade my time
Playing bartender friend
While she whittled
Onward toward end.

And in our bar
She cried aloud
Her bellowed shun
Through old refrains
Of "The House of the Rising Sun"
Yet, still, in her eyes
The ocean sang
And banked her trade
Of women in
The Port of Angels.

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-04-29 02:02 PM


a portrait well done. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
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2 posted 2001-04-29 04:08 PM


Good character development within a small space.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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3 posted 2001-04-29 04:09 PM


You make us see her, poor thing.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-04-30 11:07 PM


AmuseMi~
I enjoyed this very much.
~*Marge*~

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Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-30 11:11 PM


I know this isn't about me (wink) but thank you for acknowling my age!!!!!

I intend to be 39 for the rest of my natural redheaded life and I'll cherish this little poem in my heart always  

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JLR
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6 posted 2001-04-30 11:13 PM


Still trying to put it all together...enjoyed!
Amuse_mi
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7 posted 2001-05-01 01:14 AM


Sven, Julian, Joyce and Marge...thankyou for reading and the validation.

Kathleen...sorry, not for you, maybe someday...after I know you well enough to attempt your beautiful essence!  She was a redhead and gorgeous, too.

JLR-This is maybe more about me than Kathleen.  She was a woman I knew long ago who had MS and couldn't work.  She had a tough time living off of disability with two children to feed and chose a tougher way to pay by selling parts of her soul to people who were more than willing to take advantage.   Most would judge her or shun her, but I loved the beauty in her desire to sacrifice for her children all that she felt she could give.  I have thought of her often- and her spirit and intent has lived with me always.  The moral I guess is that seeing "into" people makes it easier to live with the actions we take that would instill in others a need to judge.  I am not doing the sentiment justice.

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