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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2001-04-29 12:45 PM

This is for my love Dave

Moonlight Dances
Across tree tops
Lighting up your beauty
As it falls across your face

The reflection of
My true loves face
Taking my breath
Leaving me Breathless

Stars Sparkle
Through darkened sky
Sharing your perfectness
Twinkling in your eyes

The shining of
My true loves eyes
Drawing me deeper in
Leaving me dizzy

Wind whispers
Over the ground
Gently caressing your scent
Breeze flowing through your hair

The Smell of
My true loves scent
Breathed in to my soul
Leaving me lightheaded

Voice echo's
Towards my ears
Your angelic voice I hear
Speaking through your soft lips

The sound of
My true loves voice
Engulfed into my heart
Leaving me smiling

Leaves Crunch
Scattered over the path
Slowly you approach me
Feeling your smooth skin

The touch of
My true loves hands
Felt deep within my cell
Leaving me completed

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 04-29-2001).]

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

1 posted 2001-04-29 01:14 AM

I can see a full moon dancing on the tree tops, each gently swaying. Your tribute to Dave... wonderful.
LP

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2001-04-29 03:05 AM

Thanks for the reply passion

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

3 posted 2001-04-29 07:52 AM

Cherished phrases of love's bonding, a charming effort.

Coal

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-29 07:58 AM

You've set a lovely mood in this poem Whiskey ... tender and tranquil, with lines overflowing with love ... a wonderful tribute!

Best wishes,
/Kit

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

5 posted 2001-04-29 08:15 AM

To misquote Richard Bach, may you and your love wander through these pages along with me and mine. Wonderful poem enjoyed it greatly.

Regards,
Olias.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-29 02:21 PM

this is wonderful whiskey. . .

just wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-04-29 03:50 PM

"The sound of my true love's voice
engulfed in my heart leaving me smiling."
I know what you mean.
My sweethearts voice melts me...her voice is beautiful, sexy and romantic...James

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