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Lightning (Haiku) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*Lightning*~Deafening thunder Pathos pure wash saline drops Sky cracking its whip Art: Lightning ~ A. Davies Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
What a powerful visual. You always find the perfect picture to compliment your pieces. I loved this.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Amuse_me - he he - find the picture first, write second - I cheat! Thank you. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
WOW!!!!! glad I wasn't under that tree! LP |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cheater!  I very much enjoyed this haiku, the last line especially. Wonderful job! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Latin passion: I am glad I was not under that tree too, thanks for reading. Allan: I confess I do cheat that way, and glad you liked the last line I thought it portrayed the crack of lightning anyway. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
finding pictures first, than the words, is NOT cheating...it's called ingenuity... shattering thoughts into shards cleaving souls apart [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent imagery in so few words Mysteria! Wonderfully vivid! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* powerful haiku....love it. Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine ~ Wow, that was a good one! Pssst, glad I don't have to stay after class whew! Kit ~ Thank you - less is more they say! Charisma ~ And thank you too, I appreciate that you liked it. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ AWESOME ! What power in the lightning of your words. They compliment the picture well. I can see how that pic would inspire you. AWESOME ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! Pathos pure...quite a powerful phrase within this fantastic piece! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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