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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-04-28 10:03 PM



A Symphony of You


I'll whisper a kiss as the lights dim.
(lubdub lubdub) timpani heart drums slowly.
A sigh of strings caressed with bows,
or delicately plucked with fingers.
Lingers.

Wood winds surge to sound.
Wet dry reeds, conductor leads,
warm cold air, everywhere.
Chills down the spine.
Divine.

Horns too many to count become one.
Tuba, saxophone, trombone,
and timpani pounds.
Resounds.
Rebounds.

and that's just the first movement...

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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1 posted 2001-04-29 02:31 AM


I've been to several, as much as I love music. But there were times I wished I had earplugs. Love it. LP
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-29 07:13 AM


I can hear this...excellent!
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-04-29 07:41 AM


A wonderful piece PoemCrazy ... I enjoyed the format in this, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

OLIAS
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4 posted 2001-04-29 07:48 AM


Great work, I enjoyed this symphony of verse

Regards,
Olias

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5 posted 2001-05-02 07:29 PM


and the second movement would be???

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Songbird
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6 posted 2001-05-02 07:44 PM


Sounds like your orchestra doesn't miss a beat! A very nice read.
PoemCrazy
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7 posted 2001-05-03 03:53 PM


Hi to everyone!

thanks.
i'm a bit slow with the responses these days,
nevermind...long story...tom

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