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Open Poetry #13

poem - advice

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2001-04-28 10:02 PM

Men Are Pigs
(aka tongue in cheek title, advice for guys)

if you love her, stare at her.
this wondrous creature
who deigns to be with you.

if you love her, make her smile,
and live for that.
let her know there's nothing you wouldn't do.

if you love her, kiss her.
not just with your lips but with your heart.
take her breath away.

if you love her, hold her.
not just with your arms but with your soul.
you'll feel the difference.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-04-29 12:09 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-29 12:10 PM

If only. Joyce

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

3 posted 2001-04-29 12:27 PM

Well, it's a start I suppose.
Will it satisfy for long?

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Amuse_mi
Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

4 posted 2001-04-29 12:27 PM

What a concept!! Hee Hee!

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

5 posted 2001-04-29 12:30 PM

not all men are oink, oink. How many stars are there to wish on. I loved your verses. LP

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